Thursday, 26 July 2012

Erica's Fan Fiction Draft


A white-collar who lived in 2011, Claire, she woke up and found out that she was in a totally unfamiliar world—Qing dynasty during Kang xi period. In Palace, Lola Millar was stated as madam. But actually, that day Claire was argue with her heartless boyfriend Jason on the street. Suddenly, Smash-up with Big track without intention. However, her spirit brought her over to the Qing dynasty.


[Headache is killing me!] Lola was in a daze and trying to open her eyes.

[Madam, Finally you awake! Doctor! Please come! Madam is awake] a girl was yelling while passing over the water to Lola


 
She opened eyes. Everything was so weird to her. Something likes Qing dynasty’s cloth, extremely long hair.

[Why I’m here. Where am I] She was flurry. Hope it was just a dream or someone just wanted to make fun of her.

A girl told her [You fell from the stairs. Are you alright? Can’t you remember?]


Lola was getting understand what has happened…


Few days past, Lola was getting better. She was thinking, without any car’s dynasty, if she can get back to her own time only way can do was crash with horse.


Emperor s sons Adam and Bert were riding the horses quickly.

[ahhh!!] She was shaking

[Are you alright? ] Bert stopped urgently

[Yes, I’m fine] damn! Just about to success.

[If you really want to die, I won’t stop my horse next time.] Adam gave her warning.

Adam could tell that Lola wanted to die on purpose.

However, Adam privately bought a drug for her.

[This is the best drug in the world; you better not to commit suicide without any concern.] Hardhearted Adam spoke strictly.

Adam’s words gave Lola to decide to take things as they come.


 
Carl was King’s the other son. Lola’s sister was Carl’s second wife. Carl was attracted deeply to the stubborn, wilful Lola.

[Lola, your sister has standout riding horse skills. Presumably you must have excellent skills too. Let’s go have a ride.] Carl was very attentive to pick a horse for her. He was very concerned about her.

This moment, Lola was attracted to his heroic riding horse skills.

After a few months to get along, Carl had some words want to let Lola know.

[I have discussed with your sister. She doesn’t mind that I marry you. You and your sister are so close. If we marry, both of you can take good care of each other during the palace life.]


 
Carl was the man whom Lola loves deeply the most. She was really interested in his request. However, she was so well-known about the history. She knew that Carl would die after He and Adam fought for the throne. Only she wanted was that Carl could live on well.


[If throne and Me. You only can choose one. Which one would you?] Lola was uneasy about his decision.


Carl all along chose the throne which he never wanted to give up.


Lola was disappointed!! Next several days, she couldn’t eat, couldn’t sleep.
But, Lola aroused Adam’s attention.


 
[These foods I especially brought for you. You should have some.] As usual, Adam’s brutal appearance. But actually at Adam’s bottom of the heart he is so worry about her.


Lola had read about the history. She knew that Adam would won the throne and be a successful emperor during Young Zhen dynasty. Although, behind the success, he would kill all his brothers

[I appreciated that.] She answered with fear.


 
Everyday Adam looked after her attentively. Finally, He won Lola’s trust. Also Lola found out that actually Adam was not that dreadful. She started curious about why the history wrote about Adam was a heartless emperor. Meanwhile, Lola fell in love again.


Kang Xi was dead in XXX. Adam became Young Zhen dynasty emperor just like what history wrote. Carl was not convinced. He provoked Adam. So he told Adam that he had a relationship with Lola.

Adam raged!! He couldn’t believe this happened. Couldn’t believe Lola lied to him.

Adam was thinking that He was going to marry Lola straight after became an emperor.

But things were not that swimmingly. He was depressed to announce that Lola was going to be betrothed to Bert. Adam didn’t want to see Lola anymore.


Lola couldn’t say anything. Because she knew that she shouldn’t lie to him.

[I know you and Lola are best friend. I trust you. Please look after her for me] Adam said.

[Sure, I will take good care of her. You shouldn’t be so worried.] Bert definitely would take responsibility for her just like sister.


Over the past year to year, Lola’s body was getting weaker and weaker. Lola really wanted to see Adam with last chance. She wanted to explain and apologies to him. She wrote a letter. Hope Adam could understand and come to visit her.


Every day she must dress up beautifully even if felt uncomfortable. Because Lola wanted to let Adam see her most beautiful moment.

However, Adam did not turn up.


[The Imperial decree arrives!] Eunuch said.

The imperial decree wrote

‘Lola Millar was dead last night’


Adam astonished. He realized that he had not read hers letter yet. He overturned every box and basket. He found it and opened it with shaking hands.


Dear Adam,





Lola passed away. Her spirits came back to 21 century. She had been lying on bed for two weeks. She opened eyes. Everything felt like just happened. The hot tears welled up in her eyes.


She was trying to search the history. Everything was not changed

But there was no Lola Millar this person.

She doubted whether it is only a dream.

She decided to go museum. Every antique was so familiar to her.

Suddenly, she saw a painting. A painting with Kang Xi emperor, Adam, Carl, Bert.

Also Lola Millar…

Clare cried. Because she knew it was real! Adam was real. Between Adam and her were real.

A guy looked so similar with Adam walked into the museum.

[Are you alright?] He tried to find a tissue for her

Clare was staring at him.

[Do I know you?] He was confused.

Clare didn’t know where to start. There’s no enough time to response.

The guy left.

Clare was staring his sight of back… missing about Adam.

4 comments:

  1. Time travel, nice! So far so good, keep writing :)

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  2. Awesome story Erica, the ending was pretty sad, how she goes back to her world, and the guy can't remember her.
    In this sentence" Between Adam and her were real." you could probably change it to "Everything that happened between Adam and her were real"

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    1. Thank you for your correction. I have Changed it to'What had existed between Adam and her was real.'
      hope its sound better too.

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