For me this fan fiction doesn't really work all that wel, cause the writer made Dean gay, i mean if you've seen the show Dean isn't gay, he just loves his family very much, even though Castiel isn't really family but he's like a second brother to Dean, the rest of the story is alright, cause in the show angels have the power to go back in time and change history, so i guess it's possible that they would have a sister, and also possible that their parents and the ladies from the diner r still alive.
There was a part that didn't make sense, in the show Crowley is a demon, so if he was to turn up at the diner, he's there for a reason, and his reasons are simple he wants something
and if he wants it he'll take it.
2.How I met your mother
The year is 2030. Ted Mosby is relaying the story of how he met his wife to his daughter and son. The story starts in the year 2005, when then twenty-seven year old architect Ted was spurred on to want to get married after lawyer Marshall Eriksen and kindergarten teacher Lily Aldrin, his best friends from their college days at Wesleyan and Marshall who was his roommate at the time, got engaged after nine years of dating each other. Ted's new quest in life was much to the dismay of his womanizing friend, Barney Stinson. But soon after Marshall and Lily's engagement, Ted believed that his life mate was going to be news reporter and aspiring news anchor Robin Scherbatsky, who, despite having had a romantic relationship with her after this time, ended up being who the kids know as their "Aunt" Robin. As Ted relays the story to his kids, the constants are that their Uncle Marshall, Aunt Lily, Uncle Barney and Aunt Robin are always in the picture and thus have something to do with how he got together with their mother.
This Fan Fiction is talking about Barney's wedding, which is to come in the next season, Barney is one of the main characters in how i met your mother, he's what's you'd like to call a "player,
the women that he's going to marry is Robin, also another main character in the show.
Overall i think this FF was pretty good, how the writer portraits Barney, he's like the same kind of Barney in the show, always being a jerk, but also the part where at the wedding he hesitates, that was pretty good, cause that's what he's like he gets nervous he zones out.
But I think what would make it better is if the writer could of described what he was thinking when he zoned out.
3.Hancock
John Hancock ( Will Smith ) is an unhappy, alcoholic superhero who is living in his own world. He has saved numerous lives in Los Angeles over the years, but in doing so has caused widespread property damage costing the city millions of dollars. The public has had enough of Hancock, and want him to either stop or move to another city. One day, Hancock saves Ray Embrey ( Jason Bateman ), a public-relations spokesperson whose attempts to market his world-changing "All-Heart" charity aren't gaining traction, from being run over by a train. Ray feels he owes Hancock his life, and he makes it his mission to change Hancock's public image for the better.
This was a good fan fiction, cause most of us wouldn't of thought of these two having a child, cause they're angels or some sort of super hero, this fan fiction is talking about the third forgotten one, who is their son, but unlike his parents he uses his power for evil, not good, you can tell by how the boy looks at Hancock, and how he smirks at the end of chapter 3.
Also in this fan fiction is how they stick with the original characteristics of the movie, for example how Mary kept the secret from him again, like she did in the movie, and how Hancock would get angry or upset about it.Though the author's grammar was pretty, but it wasn't too bad that you can't understand it.
4.Supernatural
I won't write a summary for this one, for I already did a summary for the first link, I chose this fan fiction is because the origin of the Winchester interests me, but the story wasn't what I thought it'd would of been, there wasn't that much action, and the words that the author used, were kind of confusing for me, the part where John get killed and then wrote a letter to Sir Walter Ralegh, that was confusing, cause in the letter he said, " Tonight was our first and last encounter as an Angel saved me from the Beast", how could it be tonight, that's all i have to say about this fan fiction, cause it didn't really make any sense to me.
5.X-men:Evolution
X-Men: Evolution is an American animated television series about the Marvel Comics superhero team the X-Men. In this incarnation, many of the characters are teenagers rather than adults. The series ran for a total of four seasons (52 episodes) from November 2000 until October 2003 on Kids' WB, which has made it the third longest running Marvel Comics animated series, behind only X-Men: The Animated Series and Spider-Man: The Animated Series. The series began running on Disney XD on June 15, 2009.
This Fan Fiction was, hard to understand, there wasn't any spacing, it was just one paragraph, the whole story was boring to me, wasn't much going on in the story, only Scott being stupid and Jean couldn't put up with him, and the others were speechless to his actions. I think this story would be better if the author could put some spacing into his story.
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