I've decided to my fan fiction on supernatural
This Fan Fiction is based on Dean and Castiel in purgatory and how they try and get out I'm gonna start off where the season 7 finished where Dean finds himself in purgatory with Cas
Disclaimer: I do not own the characters in Supernatural
"Dean Wake up" spoke Cas
Dean heard Cas's voice, he opened his eyes and stood up, he looked around, everything seemed dead, trees with no leaves, water that's black, black soil with no grass,
"Cas where are we?" asked Dean
"we're in purgatory" he answered
"We're in purgatory?" he shouted.
"Yes, and every soul here is a monster," he stated.
Suddenly they heard a cracking noise in the bushes, like someone or something stood on a stick, they both stared into the darkness where the sound was coming from, two red eyes appeared in the darkness
"Cas" Dean Shouted
As he turned around to look at Cas he was gone, he was alone in the darkness, he turned back to those red eyes, the monster was getting closer, Dean looked around him to see if there was anything he can use to fight it off, but all he could see was branches, then he remember he had a machete with him when they went to gank Dick Roman, immediately he got the blade out, from the inside of his leather jacket.
"No one has to get hurt, lets both walk away and pretended you never saw me," said Dean
The monster stopped moving
"SO we're good?" asked Dean
The monster roared and started charging at Dean
"Oh come on," he souted
He got in to position, getting ready to kill the monster, the monster charged towards him, the adrenaline was pumping through his body, he was scared, he had no one to help him not Sammy not Cas not Bobby, just himself, he was all by himself facing this monster.
The monster jumped at Dean, he was on the ground struggling to to push the monster off of him, he had his blade at the mouth of the monster, trying to avoid the monster from biting his head off.
"Cas, where are you? I can use a hand here!" Dean shouted into the dark
But no one answered to his call, suddenly the monster cried in agony, within seconds the monster stop, it was dead, Dean pushed the monster away, while thinking who or what killed it, he looked up and there stood Castiel, with the angel sword in his hands, dripping with the monsters blood.
"Cas, what took you so long?" he asked while getting up.
"Sorry, I had to see if it was a leviathan, so I had to use you as bait," he replied in a deep yet calm voice
"What?You used me as bait!" he was shocked
"I'm sorry it wont happen again," he answered
"You're damn right it won't!" he was angry
Suddenly he remembered something.
"Cas, how come you're not talking like rain man?" Dean was surprised
"I don't know, I guess when we ganked Dick and then coming here, something happened" he answered
"Works for me, now how do we get out of here?"Dean asked desperately
"I don't know, but we have to move now," he answered while looking around them like if there is something coming
The sound of the dying monster that they just killed, had drawn other monsters in they area to them, they had to find shouter.
Castiel walked towards Dean and placed he hand on his shoulder, Cas had zapped them some where in purgatory, before them was an disheveled villa.
"where are we Cas?" Dean looked puzzled
"This is Eve's home!" he replied
"The mother of all Eve?" He yelled
"Yes, Dean I'm afraid our only chance out is with her," he replied
Suddenly the door in front of them opened, sounds of foot steps came out from the villa, a figure of a women appeared is the darkness.
"I'd never thought of a human soul or an angel coming to purgatory before, but here you are, the first of them, Dean Winchester and Castiel, how are you boys doing?" spoke the figure in the darkness
"Oh you know the usual, just saving the world from monsters, but the different thing about this time is we ended up in purgatory!"
he said in a ironic way
"Let me guess, your little angel friend here, collected all the souls from purgatory, then he found out he couldn't control the power, cause he had leviathans living in him, but then you and your brother, saved the world by killing the big boss, but you boys didn't know that the price of killing it is, going to purgatory with it, and now you're trying to find a way out,"
she talked without stopping
"Wow words travel fast in the monster world huh?" Dean trying to be funny again
"We can't stay out here for long, he's probably looking for us right now," Cas interrupted
"Who? Dick?" Dean questioned
"Yes!" Cas looked concerned
"You boys don't have to worry about leviathans, my babies will take care of them," Eve said confidently
Dean and Cas didn't know that they were already surrounded by monsters.
"Cas! I think we've got company" Dean said quietly while reaching for the machete
"You don't have to worry about them Dean, if I wanted you dead I would of already done it myself," she stated
"What are they? Alphas?" Dean wanted an answer
"They're just a little something I made, when I was on earth," she said with a menacing smirk
"Those things over there are Jefferson Starships?" he asked while looking at the creatures surrounding him and Castiel
"Really? Dean that's the best name you can come up with?" Eve asked him
"well... yeah," Dean mumbled
"Just come inside, so we can discuss our partnership?" Eve was getting impatient
"Yea, sure" Dean answered
As they entered the villa they heard a cry of a monster in a distance, they knew what it was, cause they've heard it several times for the past year, it was a cry of a leviathan.
Yiu might put a ? after the second "we're in purgatory" to indicate a response to the first utterance.
ReplyDeleteor Think about words you can use to give the dialogue a bit more uuump!
For example "We're in purgatory." Dean's voice echoed.
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ReplyDeleteThis sounds great so far! Just a few minor errors though:
ReplyDelete"No one has to get hurt, lets both walk away and pretended you never saw me," said Dean
You accidently wrote pretended not pretend.
and
Suddenly they heard a cracking noise in the bushes, like like someone or something stood on a stick, they both stared into the darkness where the sound was coming from, two red eyes appeared in the darkness
you wrote the word like 2 times
apart from that it sounds good! Can't wait to read the rest of it :)
Thanks Tasha for that comment I'll change it right away.
ReplyDeleteNice story. I really enjoy this part
ReplyDelete'Suddenly the door in front of them opened, sounds of foot steps came out from the villa, a figure of a women appeared is the darkness.'
Which made me start to image and get into the story.