Thursday, 26 July 2012

Hyoseok's fan fiction draft

Vampire Diaries
before writing this I want to say something about my ability.
I'm an international student. I've been studying English for less than a year. there will be countless errors. Even though I was able to enrolled here, I still need to learn English. so please understand if I made so many mistakes. 
 
Outline
 Story starts when Stefan leaves Elena to join Klaus.
Klaus keeps turning werewolves into hybrids, and he will have a large group of hybrid.

 A new character joins the Mystic Falls : a priest has a divine power to defeat all supernatural creatures(vampires, werewolves, hybrids and witches.).
 Elena and her friends thought he will finish their problems about whole Klaus and his hybrids thing, but Elena's friends, Caroline, Tyler, Damon and Bonnie are also target of the priest.
 The priest dose not understand that there are some good side of vampires and werewolf.
 Klaus comes back to Mystic Falls with Stefan, wants to make an union with Elena and Mystic Falls council.
The council thinks this is a great chance to get rid of whole vampire thing, decides to cooperate with the priest.
 Elena decides to make a deal with Klaus, but Damon think Klaus has another plan, try to interrupt their cooperation.




Part 1

Mystic Falls, the small town which has a long history about vampires, Carol Lockwood drives a car on a road at night.

"I can't believe what I saw.... but you were right...  my son is werewolf."She's saying on a phone.

"No! that's not possible! he's my son! I still love my son even he's not a human anymore." she shouted.

"No! I said I will neve.. wa.. wait!"  suddenly she senses that one guy's standing in her driving path.

 she doesn't have much time to avoid the man after she sensed him. 

"aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!" she screamed. Her car crashed the man. His body bounced off the car.

"Oh my god. What did I just do?" she got off the car and walked toward to him. His body doesn't move an inch.

"He...he's dead! what am I going to do?" she's shaking standing in front of the body.

She ran back to her car and grapped her phone.

"Damon, Damon! are you still there?" her voice is trembling.

"Yep~, I am still waiting for your answer~, now time to stab your son~. he said like singing.

"It dosen't matter by now! I crashed a person!" she shouted.

"what? who?" he asked.

"I don't know! he was standing on a road, and seems like dead." she started shaking her body again.

"Whow! congratragions! finally you killed someone! but I think I told to kill your son not the drunken guy on a road, didn't I?" he said with a sacrcastic remark.

"Stop joking! I'm serious Damon, I really don't know what I'm gonna do." she's about to cry.

"Okay, okay, please relax Mrs.Lockwood~. I'll take care of it." he sighed.

"Thank you, please hurry." Carol said.

"Yes, Ma'am, I'll be right there." 

"haa.." she hanged up the phone and sighed.

She closed car door and turned back to lean against a car. After she turned back, she couldn't move an inch.

"Ho...how?" she can't even say a word.

The guy who was hit by Carol's car is standing in front of her.

"Is this your car which hit me just now?" He asked.

"I'm so sorry I didn't mean to do it. Are you OK? You flied at least 10 mitres." she said and tried to touch his bidy to make sure his ok. Suddenly the man catch her arm.

"Ouch! it hurt." she tried to take off his hand.

"You make me hurt, so you've got to heal me." he smiled.

Carol's face looked got scared. "Are you... are you a vampire?" she said and moved her eyes check around her to find anyone can help her, but there is nobody but she and the vampire.

"Am I a vampire? way better than that, ma'am." He's still smiling.

"Werewolf?" she asked with wondering face, because werewolves don't feed on human blood.

"I used to be, but not anymore." he showed her his long sharp canine teeth.

"Hybrid! You are a hybrid of the group led by Klaus!" she shouted and then tried run away, but the hybrid still grabher arm strongly.

"I drink vervain tea everyday! You can't feed on me!" she said like screaming and struggled to escape from him.

"Don't worry it was kidding, I don't need your blood."

"then please let me go."

"I said I don't need your blood, didn't say I need nothing from you."

"what do you want from me?"

"I heard that your son is very special."

"Are you planning to turn Tylor on to a hybrid?"

"Klaus is very interested about him." Carol looks so scared and desperated.

"I'm interested, too." Someone said. The hybrid and Carol look at the place the voice from. Some guy  with dark hair and dark suit walks very slowly toward to them.




















1 comment:

  1. rather than repeat "saying on the phone" can you think of another way of communicating the same idea?

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